
After discussing my finishing prodcut with my target audience, i received a variety of feedback, both positive and constructive. It was clear that the audience thought that there were too many colours going on, therefore, when i produce my music magazine, i will use a mazimum of 3 different colours, in order to make the writing on the cover easier to read. Following the colour scheme idea, it was also reported that my main image should have been simplier, instead of using a very colourful jumper. Though these points were suggested, positive critism included the 'happy' main image, the grasping start holding information and the hand made bar code.
Kelly, be sure to use 'I' rather than 'i' when referring to yourself.
ReplyDeleteAlso, I don't think the background of the TV is particularly effective as it makes it difficult to read the portfolio sections.